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Task 1: The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.

Task 1: The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
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The chart compares the proportion of
women
 that gave birth to their
first
 child of different ages in Australia in three years 1966,1986 and 2006.
Overall
,
while
 the percentage of
women
 who had
the
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first
 baby aged 30 or under followed an upward trend, the proportion of
first
-time
mothers
 who fall into
30
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the 30
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 to above 40 age group experienced an adverse pattern. In 1966, the rate of 20 to 24-year-old
first
-time
mothers
 ranked
first
, at more than 60%, followed by the ratio of 25-to-30-year-old
first
-time
mothers
 and the proportion of
women
 who had their
first
 baby when they are 19 or under, at nearly 40% and 35%, respectively. About 13% of 30-to-34-year-old
women
 gave birth to their
first
 child, being nearly double for 34-to-39-year-old
first
-time
mothers
, at 7%.
In addition
, the data of
first
-time
mothers
 who fall into
30
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the 30
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 to above 40 age group witnessed
gradually
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 increased throughout the period, from 13% to 50%, from 7% to 30% and from 2% to 5%.
By contrast
, the percentage of
first
-time
mothers
 aged 19 and under and 20-to-24-year-old
first
-time
mothers
 dropped significantly in 2006, to 15% and 35%, respectively.
Furthermore
, the figure for
first
-time
mothers
 who fall into the 25 to 30 age group decreased to 45% in 2006 after climbing to 55% in 1986
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, first, mothers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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