The bar chart illustrates the percentage of a car factory's total sale in four continents ( Asia, Europe, South America, Europe and Asia) annually during the five-year period from 2006 to 2010.

A close look at the chart reveals the

sale

of the

factory

in Asia presented

a

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upward

increasing

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with slight fluctuation during the

period

. The percentage of its

sale

was 30% in 2006 sharing the same amount with the sales in Europe and South

American

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America

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.

Then

the

sale

increased dramatically increased

at the end

of the

period

with 50% in 2010, the largest

sale

among the continents. The

sale

in

the

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Europe

firstly

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presented

a

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increasing trend with 30% in 2006 and

then

reached about 40% in 2008, the largest

sale

of the year. After 2008, the

sale

declined again, reaching 30% again. The

sale

in North America presented an opposite trend as that of Europe.

In

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both

end

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of the

period

, the sales

was

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similar about 30%, the highest

sale

in North America and decreased in the middle of the

period

, only 5% in 2008. The

factory

did not do well in South America with its

sale

gradually decreasing from 30% in 2006 to 10% in 2008.

Overall

, the cars produced by

this

factory

were always popular in Asia and Europa;

This

factory

has become less popular in South

American

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America

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.