It is generally believe some people born with talent, such as for sport or music and othet not. However, it is sometimes claimed that child can be taught to become a good person or musician.

It is a common believe that some children have exceptional innate talent and they become
good
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better
sportsmen and musicians in their young age.While, others assert that anyone can become an eminent athlete or a composer, but provided that, he
have
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has
a mentor and a passion to do
this
. On the one hand, people having an inbred talent, they do not focus on any practices and they give
their
objective case of they
them
a normal try but others cannot reach at
this
level. 
For example
, a well known musician, Mozart was effortlessly
compose
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composed
a melody since it was a child.
Furthermore
, the Olympic gold
medalist
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medal
medallist
,
Michael Phelps torso
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the Michael Phelps torso
have swimmed
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has swum
have swum
easily. If we talk about, a young English singer, Justin Bieber he was just at 10 when he released his
first
album and become renowned all over the world.
Thus
, the inborn genius exists.
On the other hand
, some school of thought asserts that proper coaching and determination can make any humans to become a competent in the field of a sport and a music.
For instance
, a questionnaire distributed in the American schools, whose results revealed that 75% students claim that their mentors and a rigorous practice capable them to play any kind of music drivers.
In addition
, a famous cricket player, Sachin Tendulkar when he made his
first
century at the age of 16,
then
he gave all of his credit to his school coach. So, training with experts transform anyone to become a master athlete or a composer. To conclude, I personally agree with both of these arguments. Because in some cases, one needs dexterous skills along with the special training.
Also
, it depends on their genes, if
parents
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the parents
are good in something or during a pregnancy, if a mother spends most of their time on specific activities,
then
their offsprings will
also
well in that area.
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