Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work,if Involves say why you think the job would be suitable for her/him explain how to apply for this job

Dear Antu, How are you? I am glad to hear you ,you are shifting
in
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Shimla. It is
very
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beautiful place. Our
Company
has opened a branch in Shimla. There
are
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requirement a marketing
Excutive
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Executive
and I think you are perfect for the
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. The
job
related
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to your previous study. Well,
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would be glad for you After right received your request. Yesterday, I got an email from my
company
" We have
require
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a marketing executive for Shimla branch". I remember
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you had done your MBA in marketing and you have
a
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great experience as a marketing executive. So I think, the
job
would be suited to you perfectly
,
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because you have attractive convincing power. If you want to apply, You can visit on our
Company
's website and contact with
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Rajesh who has HR of our
Company
. You should read all
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related to the
job
on the website.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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