In many countries, more and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Over the past decades, the development of technology has never failed to draw public attention and provoke debate.

Although

, an overwhelming majority of families have possessed more than one piece of electrical device with the proliferation of high tech products in every walk of life, the issue as to whether it does more good than harm or not remains controversial. I hold an opinion that household goods, it probably used can bring you more drawbacks than benefits. On the one hand, the overuse of household goods can result in some negative effects which can be a potential thread to the economy of family members and the country as a whole. In fact, most of the consumers in developing countries

nowadays get

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have nowadays got

advantages from the globalization due to the raise for the income of the citizens.

As a result

, the more money they get, the more goods they consume and buying electrical devices is one of the

aspect but

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aspect, but

they rarely use them because of the working

load up to their

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load up their

ears. Eventually, consuming products without using will end-up becoming a waste while they can use that amount of money to invest or do something else.

For instance

: many young adults in some Asian countries tend to buy a rice cooker after they move out from their families

buy

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the pressure comes from their

jobs’

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job’s

job

duties and overtime

working prevent

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working to prevent

them from using it.

This

example illustrates consumerism of the young people it will affect the individual financial base and accompanying mass production will drive the exploration of natural resources.

On the other hand

, domestic equipments have improved the quality of life and doing chores ceases to be a bother. Since the living standards of human

beings rises

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beings, rises

through time and

in addition

, the technology industry has a

rapidly

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rapid

improvement speed in order to save time and effort for the users,

this

lead to

the high

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higher

demand for the household appliances.

For example

: the benefits of washing machine for everyone, people can cut off their energy and use time for something else.

Moreover

, there are a number of other devices with a numerous applying ways in order to support people in their daily lives. In conclusion, nowadays electrical appliances bring both

boons

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boon

and banes, If they are used carelessly, disadvantages will eclipse/out-weight/overshadow the advantages.