You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope
this
letter finds you in great moment. I am writing
this
letter in
express
Suggestion
expressing
my interest in joining the one-week walking
tour
in the mountain, you announced. Since my childhood, I am pretty much enthusiastic in taking part in trekking activities as I am a nature lover and I feel more exultant in peeking into the green valleys. I love the chilled weather of
mountains
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the mountains
as well. I have several questions about the
tour
.
Firstly
, I would greatly appreciate you, if you could arrange to send in detailed information about the
tour
packages, pricing and the dates in which the
tour
is available.
Also it
Accept comma addition
Also, it
would be great if you can let me know about the prerequisites or prearrangements that the participants need to meet or to arrange to take part of the
tour
. Please inform about the complete itinerary covered under each package.
Secondly
, I was down
by
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with
dengue fever recently and still suffering from joint pains a little bit. I am looking for your suggestion in whether taking part of
this
journey practically possible. Are the mountains are more steep? Will I be fit enough to walk the total distance. Thanks in advance for help and support, and looking forward to
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
from you as soon as possible. Kind Regards,

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