the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The waste produced by company A was the most, with around 12

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waste

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in 2000. The total trend

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decreased noticeably and reached about 8

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in 2015.

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drop trend was

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seen in

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B, the figure climbed to 10

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by 2005, but after

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it plumbed dramatically

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and then

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reached 3

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in 2015. There was an opposite line of waste in

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which is

company

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C, with the figure were 4

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which was the lowest in 2000. But it has

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substantially rose in 15 years

then

reached 10

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and became the highest one in 2015.

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