Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher asking for her help. In your letter Explain why your son needs help Ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods And suggest a possible schedule for the lessons.

Dear
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Jane, I am writing to ask you if you are available to help my son with some extra English lessons. My son, John, missed out on most of
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term's curriculum due to an unexpected family trip which we all had to be away.
Therefore
, he is struggling to catch up with the same stage where other students are at the moment, especially listening and English listening skills.
Also
, he lacks confidence when asked to speak in front of his class. I would be grateful if you could tell me the methods you use to improve
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pronunciation and listing skills. I
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was wondering if you could advise, based on your experience, how long it would take for him to catch up with the rest of the class.
Besides
, which way do you think is better between online teaching and teaching in person? John is available every weekday after school, so I was hoping that you could teach him in the late afternoon or early evening. Please confirm if
this
date and time is suitable for you. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Linda
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