In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting

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of owning, renting a property for accommodation purpose has become increasingly popular in certain countries.
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growing trend has both benefits and drawbacks associated with it. Living on a lease has several advantages, but especially the flexibility to relocate and lower cost of living. With regard to ease of relocating, people in modern time are more career-oriented and open to moving to a new city for higher education and more job opportunities. In
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scenario, staying in a rented apartment is more beneficial than buying a new home by considering the convenience of moving into a new city. At the same time, it is more economical in the short term.
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, the property prices in metro cities are significantly higher and not everyone can afford exorbitant housing prices and mortgage rates.
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, it is advantageous in every aspect to find a rented place to stay for the short term. Despite these advantages, there are
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limitations of a property for lease. Tenants are not allowed by landlords to renovate or decorate their place the way they want to.
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, sometimes they have to compromise with the wall colour or the floor tiles, which they would have renovated in their own house.
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, tenants get the feeling of living in a temporary house, where they cannot change the existing architecture and do not even feel like calling it a 'home'.
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feeling has a direct psychological effect on their mind and they do not feel rested in their own personal environment. In conclusion, the convenience of living in a rented house for a short period is a major advantage and no rights to replace existing infrastructure is the disadvantage of being a tenant.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rent
  • buy
  • home
  • house
  • owner
  • landlord
  • tenant
  • lease
  • contract
  • deposit
  • monthly
  • money
  • cost
  • price
  • loan
  • repair
  • fix
  • maintenance
  • move
  • stay
  • freedom
  • budget
  • plan
  • future
  • advantage
  • disadvantage
  • plus
  • minus
  • security
  • risks
  • rules
  • change
  • place
  • own
  • ownership
  • money
  • income
  • stay longer
  • stay short
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