The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in the town of
Stokeford
between 1986 and today.
In general, it is clear
shown Replace the word
clearly
the
Correct your spelling
that
Stokeford
has became
a much more modern city, by constructing new retirement Wrong verb form
become
house
and demolishing farmland.
The first interesting alter is that to primary school in the middle of Fix the agreement mistake
houses
Stokeford
has been enlarged and added 2 new buildings. Next
change is the large farmland which is located around Correct article usage
The next
primary
school was demolished in order to extend the road of Add an article
the primary
bridge
. The large house in 1930 has destroyed and Correct article usage
the bridge
it
was converted into Correct pronoun usage
apply
retirement
home. Add an article
a retirement
Furthermore
, By 2010 the farmland west of Stokeford
had been demolished. A final development is that Correct article usage
the near
near by
post office used to be 2 small Correct your spelling
nearby
shop
, Change to a plural noun
shops
however
Correct article usage
the shops
shops
was transformed into a big post office.Fix the agreement mistake
shop
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