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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about the list of expensive purchases shown
in
Suggestion
on
 my credit card
statement
. I did not buy those things. I am a client of your bank, my name is M.S.
and
Suggestion
And
 my number of the bill is 2222. I made my
last
 transaction on the 30th of March. When I received my bank
statement
 and checked it, I see a few other transactions in the
statement
, which I am unaware of. It was transactions about buying fly tickets twice. I received neither a message nor an e-mail regarding these purchases made with my card. It could be a glitch in the application or your system. Please check my information and return my money for transactions, which was wrong.
This
 problem needs immediate resolution. After solving the problem, I request you to resend the revised
statement
 to avoid
further
 confusion on my bill. Yours faithfully, M.S.
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