Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature and history of their own country rather than the literature and history of other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different ideas about
learn
Suggestion
learning
history
and literature
of their nation
. Some people think it is more important for children to learn history
and literature
of other countries; however
, I personally believe learning literature
and history
of their own country
is more important.
To begin
with, when children are taught about their own national history
and literature
, they can learn from their history
and literature
what has happened to popular and great people in their history
. Moreover
, by learning history
children can understand about their culture and how they had lived and how much their country
developed. Besides
, learning history
helps children find valuable information and data about past
. Suggestion
the past
For
example
, they can know about their methods of traditional medicine and traditional treatment and their lifestyle.
Learning history
and literature
of their country
's sense
of identity
happens as a result
of knowing their history
and it gives theme
Suggestion
a thematic sense
thematic sense
sense
of roots and belonging. For
example
, they can know about their ancestors and origin. For instance
, Iranian people know their ancestors who are Arian. On the other hand
, children can be more familiar with their own country
by knowing more stories behind the nation
through study history
and literature
and it shows
patterns of Suggestion
showed
behavior
or events in the past and their manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
outcome
which can help them avoid similar outcome
in the future.
In conclusion, learning history
of their Suggestion
the history
country
is important to let children know about their history
and literature
, so they can have a sense
of identity
People have different ideas about learn
Suggestion
learning
history
and literature
of their nation
. Some people think it is more important for children to learn history
and literature
of other countries; however
, I personally believe learning literature
and history
of their own country
is more important.
To begin
with, when children are taught about their own national history
and literature
, they can learn from their history
and literature
what has happened to popular and great people in their history
. Moreover
, by learning history
children can understand about their culture and how they had lived and how much their country
developed. Besides
, learning history
helps children find valuable information and data about past
. Suggestion
the past
For
example
, they can know about their methods of traditional medicine and traditional treatment and their lifestyle.
Learning history
and literature
of their country
's sense
of identity
happens as a result
of knowing their history
and it gives theme
Suggestion
a thematic sense
thematic sense
sense
of roots and belonging. For
example
, they can know about their ancestors and origin. For instance
, Iranian people know their ancestors who are Arian. On the other hand
, children can be more familiar with their own country
by knowing more stories behind the nation
through study history
and literature
and it shows
patterns of Suggestion
showed
behavior
or events in the past and their manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
outcome
which can help them avoid similar outcome
in the future.
In conclusion, learning history
of their country
is important to let children know about their history
and literature
, so they can have a sense
of identity
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