The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-lebelled coffe and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-lebelled coffe and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The tables illustrate the amount of money spent on
Fairtrade
coffee
and
bananas
from 1999 to 2004 in five separate
countries
:
UK
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the UK
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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium,
Sweden
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and Sweden
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.
Overall
, the
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
rose in all five
countries
,
while
there were three out of five
countries
went
up
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the money spent on
Fairtrade
bananas
in two years.
Additionally
,
UK
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the UK
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saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products. In 1999, Switzerland had the highest
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
, at 3
millions
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million
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of
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euros
,
while
the highest
sales
of
Fairtrade
bananas
were in the
UK
, at 15
millions
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million
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of
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euros
. By 2004,
UK
's
Fairtrade
coffee
strikingly grow to 20
million
of
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euros
, over three times
sales
in Switzerland.
Furthermore
, there was a surge in
UK's
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the UK's
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Fairtrade
bananas
in 2004, from 15
million
of
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euros
to 47
million
of
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euros
in 1999 and 2004 respectively.
Sales
of two
Fairtrade
products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium,
Sweden
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and Sweden
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.
Small
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A small
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increase in
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
can be seen, but revenue remained at 2
millions
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million
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of
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euros
or below in all three
countries
in both years.
Finally
, it is remarkable that the
sales
in
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Fairtrade
bananas
went down to 1 and 0.9
million
of
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euros
in Belgium and Sweden respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fairtrade, coffee, bananas, countries, uk, sales, euros, million with synonyms.
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