some people believe teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects, even ones they do not enjoy. others, however, believe that teenagers should only focus on the subjects they are best at or find most interesting. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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task response
Ensure that your essay fully addresses all aspects of the task prompt. You need to clearly discuss both views and provide your own opinion.
coherence cohesion
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lexical resource
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grammatical range
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