The given diagram indicates information about how used glass bottles are recycled.
The presented diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of
recycle
Change the verb form
recycling
glass
bottles
after customers Correct pronoun usage
themused
used
.
Replace the word
use
Overall
, it can be seen that this
production consists of three stages, starting from customers using bottles
to selling in Add an article
the supermarket
a supermarket
supermarket
for Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
Add an article
the customer
a customer
customer
to buy Fix the agreement mistake
customers
it
.
First of all, after customers used Correct pronoun usage
them
bottles
, they throw always to
collect point and Correct pronoun usage
them to
then
garbage
truck will collect the Correct article usage
the garbage
bottles
to clean plant
. Correct article usage
the plant
Next
, after bottles
are clean
from high pressurised water, they are Replace the word
cleaned
sort
including green, brown and clear to Wrong verb form
sorted
glass
factory. Add an article
the glass
Thus
, before being melted in furnace
, Add an article
a furnace
the furnace
glass
bottles
are break
Change the verb form
are broken
as
pieces. Change preposition
into
Therefore
, before being fill
in the block of the new Change the form of the verb
filled
glass
bottle, they are mix
with melted liquid and new liquid Change the verb form
are mixed
glass
. Finally
, before glass
bottles
are selling
to different places, they Wrong verb form
sold
are distributed
Change the verb form
have distributed
packaging
.Change preposition
in packaging
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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