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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Manager, I would like to express my interest in applying for the position of
waiter
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a waiter
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 at Shelby’s restaurant as published
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 London Press dated
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apply
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March 05, 2020. Currently, I am employed as
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a full-time
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 waiter at William’s fresh café but as the commute is very far and
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, I do believe
restaurant
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the restaurant
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 has
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 opportunity for each individual to work in
fast-paced
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 environment maintaining hygiene and customer satisfaction. As the restaurant is close by to my residency, I can work any shift even if someone call-in sick and do have food handler and smart serve certification with 1-year experience which distinguishes me from
other potential candidate
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. I would be thrilled if we could set up an interview at your ease in between Monday to Wednesday as I do not work these days. I really appreciate your time and consideration. Looking forward to
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 more
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the opportunity. Best Regards, Parth Shah
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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