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Some people consider that prohibiting
tourism
 in certain areas can keep local
culture
 alive while others think
this
 is of no use and change is unav
oidabl. In
incapable of being avoided or prevented
inevitable
 my opinion, banning
tourism
 in certain areas to preserve local
culture
 is a wrong move. On the one hand
banning tou
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hand, banning
r
istry doe
s avoid local
culture
 from being exti
ncted.
no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives
extinct
For exam
ple consider the
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example, consider
 tribes living in Amazon forest or in African remote areas.Tour to
such
 places are obviously not allowed legally.Today
such
 tribes have been successful in preserving their
culture
 as they hardly get to meet any outsider.So their
culture
 has never been influenced by any outs
iders cul
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outsider
tures.
On the other hand
banning
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hand, banning
tourism
 causes great loss both for the local
area
 and for the tourists.It dwindles the local income as
tourism
 can be the source of that
area
's finance.
For exam
ple consider Goa
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example, consider
,Inn
u
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,
merable Foreigners and Indians visit Goa almost ever
yday whi
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every day
ch brings lots of income for locals and businessmen.Banning
tourism
 can
also
 lead to unemployment for many local dwellers whose daily wage comes from the tourists. And banning
tourism
 to safe places is like wasting nature's gift which is meant to be savoured by all. As some people consider that change is for sure, I don't believe so.Locals can preserve their
cult
ure yet all
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culture, yet
ow the tourists to enjoy the beauty of their
area
.
For instance
,con
s
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,
ider Dakshina Kannada's typical cultural dance called Bharatanatyam, where locals exhibit their dance with pride and tourists enjoy it. In fact cultural pecu
larity of
an odd or unusual characteristic
peculiarity
peculiarities
an
area
 can drive more tourists to visit the place, increasing the local income. In conclusion, banning
tourism
 in a particular
area
 in order to keep the local
culture
 alive has more losses than the beni
fits.And
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
 change can be avoided despite encouraging
tourism
.
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