The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps provided below present information about the alteration of the West Park Secondary School in the period from 1950 to 2010.
According to
the maps, the school building was situated on the right side along the main road. There were the houses next
to the building which had been completely destroyed in 1980 whereas
the science block and car park was
constructed. The other remarkable change took place in the location of the farmland behind the house which had been turned into Correct subject-verb agreement
were
the
sports field in 1980.
The playground, Correct article usage
a
likewise
, the Main building was
remained untouched through the period from 1950 to 2010. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, the
significant modification occurred in the sports field, it was cut down, Correct article usage
a
by contrast
, the parking space was enlarged and took the entire place behind the science block, where the sports ground partly
situated before.
In conclusion, it is explicitly observed that the area was modernized through the 60 years of its construction.Add a missing verb
was partly
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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