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The chart below shows the numbers of male and female students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where is relevant.

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The bar chart shows the gender distribution of students doing scientific research across a range of disciplines at a UK university in 2009. In five of six disciplines
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 males outnumbered females. Male students made a particular large proportion of the student group
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 subjects related to the study of inanimate objects and materials
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physics
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astronomy, and geology.The gender gap was particularly large in the field of physics, where there were five times as many male students.
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 female students. Men and women were more equally represented in subjects related to the study of living things
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biology
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medicine
 and veterinary
medicine
.In biology, there were nearly as many women approximately 200 as men approximately 240.
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 true of
medicine
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medicine
 was the only discipline in which women outnumbered men, roughly 110 in comparison with 90 men. Overall, the chart shows that
this
 university, science related subjects continue to be male-dominated;
however
, women have a significant presence in fields related to
medicine
 and the life sciences
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