Task 1: The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.

Task 1: The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.
The maps illustrate the differences in a small urban between 1995 to now.
Overall
, in the past, to the northeast of town there
were
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was
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farmland
area
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areas
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near
forest
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a forest
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part section and a hotel,
while
, to the northwest, there were housing areas and some shops. To the south of town, there was a fishing port, and there was a fish market and café in the west and east, respectively.
Over development
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Overdevelopment
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time, there are many changes
such
as apartments and car
park
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parks
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, but
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the hotel
a hotel
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hotel
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hotels
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, café and housing remain the same with changes in size. At the present time, farmland and forest park areas had been converted by golf and tennis in the northeast. To the northwest of
urban
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the urban
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, several homes had been built, and some shops had been replaced
some
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by some
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restaurants. To the south of the road,
fishing
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the fishing
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port had been demolished. A fishing market had been reconstructed and became apartments in the west of town, and there is a car park close hotel section opposite a café.
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