You have a test in your English class next week, but you cannot attend. Write to your teacher. In your letter: • Explain your situation. • Apologise for not being able to take the test. • Ask whether it is possible for you to take the test at another time.

Dear Mrs Smith, I am writing to ask you for a favour. I know that we have a test on Monday
next
week to review units 1-5 in our textbook.
However
, I have a meeting with the Immigration Department at 1
Dam on
the friend of Phintias who pledged his life that Phintias would return (4th century BC)
Damon
that day and so I cannot attend. I am terribly sorry about being absent, but unfortunately the appointment was made many months in advance and it is impossible for me to reschedule. If I miss it, my visa will be cancelled and I will be forced to leave the country. I am sure you can understand,
therefore
, what a crucial meeting
this
is for me. Is it possible for me to take the test at another time? I would be happy to stay behind one afternoon for as long as necessary to complete the exam. I apologise once again and hope I am not causing you too much inconvenience.
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