The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table illustrates forest area in hectares divided
in
six parts of
the world in the years 1990, 2000, Change the preposition
into
2005
.
In 1990 Correct word choice
and 2005
Europe
and South America
had the vast majority of forested land respectively 989 and 946 millions
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million
of
ha, Change preposition
apply
on the other
hand
Oceania had the fewest Add the comma(s)
,hand
one
in the same year, only 199 millions
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million
of
ha. Change preposition
apply
The other
countries like Africa, North Correct article usage
Other
America
and Asia
remais
in the middle with 749, 708 and 576 Correct your spelling
remains
remain
millions
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million
of
ha.
In 2000, all the countries had big or Change preposition
apply
less
losses, Change the quantifier
fewer
in
contrast
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,contrast
Europe
was the only one
that improved her lands adding 9 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
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million
of
Change preposition
apply
hectars
for a total of 998.
In 2005, North Correct your spelling
hectares
America
and Oceania stay with
almost the same areas Change preposition
in
than
five years before, 705 for the first Change preposition
as
one
and from 198 to 197 for the second
one
. Therefore
, Africa and South America
lost again some millions
of hectars
(respectively from 709 to 691 and from 904 to 882). Correct your spelling
hectares
By
contrast
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,contrast
Europe
and Asia
higher their forested land in five years (in particular
Asia
from 570 to 584, meanwhile Europe
from 998 to 1001).
In conclusion, Europe
always develop some new forested areas, Asia
only from 2000 to 2005, altrough
the Correct your spelling
although
oterh
countries always ream steady or decrease their Correct your spelling
other
millions
of hectars
of Correct your spelling
hectares
lands
.Fix the agreement mistake
land
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