Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to cleat money for a charity organisation. The letter needs to cover the following details -Why do you want to collect money for the charity organisation? -Ask your friend to help -Explain in detail how your friend can help

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am witting

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letter to ask for some help related to a painting charity from you. As you know well, I am interested in looking after a host of refugees as a graphic designer and

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I got a chance to help them through a global organisation. You are a

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well-known

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well-know

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artist in the fine art industry.

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why I am asking you to help me

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with your paintings. I have planned an exhibition to support the charity in two months. So, if you offer and send me some artworks for

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exhibition to help the refugees, I would appreciate it including all members of the organisation. I would like to attach more details in

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days after fixing every schedule. Should you have any questions in regard to

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charity, please contact me via e-mail at your convenient time. I am looking forward to receiving your reply soon. With love, Judy Park

Fri Apr 10 2020

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

158 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to cleat money for a charity organisation. The letter needs to cover the following details -Why do you want to collect money for the charity organisation? -Ask your friend to help -Explain in detail how your friend can help

The Greeting

Human activities have led negative effects on plant and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recent advances in medical science have resulted in increased life expectancy over the past few years. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?