The world has been suffering with burning issue of obesity which plays significant role in disease increase due to daily eating fast food and less exercise

The world has been suffering with
burning issue
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the burning issue
of
obesity which
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obesity, which
plays
significant role
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a significant role
in
disease increase
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the disease increase
due to daily eating fast food and less exercise
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Government and individual should take action
for
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to
resolve
this
problem
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There are many reasons behind
this
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In past people were working very hard doing different type of activities like Farming without advance technology
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use bicycle and walking for travel whereas in today’s era people are using latest technology in farming
,
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use cars and high speed trains
for
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to
travel due to
this
reasons
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reason
people physical activity
diminish
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diminishes
become
main reason
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the main reason
to
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for
young people are using more medicine compared to
past
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the past
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second
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Second
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young people are eating more junk foods which
is
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are
harmful for health as well as decrease immunity system
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Young people are very busy doing different activity
such
as study
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sports and dance
therefore
not possible to enough
rest
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rest, then
then
this
certainly leads to catch with different disease
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In past people are using leisure time in recreation activity like reading
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play indoor game while in today people are using free time in play video game
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watch movie
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watch television so their physical and mental capability
reduce
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reduces
compared to
past
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the past
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I will concentrate here on the ones are most important
first
of all countries government should take action against junk food stores
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we
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We
are seeing that number of sick young people
increase
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increases
in each
countries
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country
due to unhealthy life style
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All in all people should adept healthy life style
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Agglomerating
all the
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all, the
point elaborated
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above, it
can be concluded that by getting futuristic and proactive we can make the changes favourable to us.
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