The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows the number of
students
in
both genders who enrolled in different Change preposition
of
courses
at UK University in 2009.
As this
diagram shows, in all courses
men
enrolled more than women
except in The Veterinary medicine course
. In the first three courses
which are non-medical courses
, the gaps between men
and women
is was so many. Especially in the Physics course
, that is
was almost 200 men
or in another way one-fifth of the class were women
. The gap in the other two was less.
However
, in three medical courses
, this
gap was the least approximately 15 to 20 people. As it
can be seen, the Biology Correct pronoun usage
apply
course
had most
Correct article usage
the most
students
in sum (men
and women
) and Veterinary medicine had the least number of students
.
Overall
, this
chart shows the number of enrollment of students
, in different courses
which
the Change preposition
in which
men
enrollment in courses
are
more than Unnecessary verb
apply
woman
except in Fix the agreement mistake
women
Veterinary
medicine Correct article usage
the Veterinary
course
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, courses, men, women, course with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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