The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying  six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows the number of
students
in
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of
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both genders who enrolled in different
courses
at UK University in 2009. As
this
diagram shows, in all subjects
men
enrolled more than
women
except in The Veterinary medicine course. In the first three
courses
which are non-medical
courses
, the gap between
men
and
women
was so many. Especially in the Physics subject, that
was
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were
show examples
almost 200
men
or in another way, one-fifth of the class was
women
. The gap in the other two was less.
However
, in three medical
courses
,
this
gap was the
last
approximately
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of approximately
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15 to 20 people. As can be seen, the Biology course had the most
students
in sum (
men
and
women
) and Veterinary medicine had the least number of
students
.
Overall
,
this
chart shows the number of enrolments of
students
, in different
courses
which the
men
enrolment in
courses
is more than
woman
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women
show examples
except in Veterinary medicine course.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, courses, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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