You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher, but you couldn’t return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter, you should: • what book it was • how helpful the book was • explain why you couldn’t return it in time.

Dear
Mrs.
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Hawkins, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter concerning the book that you had lent me for my Implantology course
last
month. The book is the 6th edition of Essential Implantology by
Dr.
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Mohit Salkar.
Furthermore
, it provides all the basic information regarding implants and their procedure
,
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and
also
illustrates
about
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recent upgrades and
advancement
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of the subject. It was generous of you to give me
this
textbook.
Moreover
, everything in it is defined exceptionally well, and
also
the examples of each case with photographs have made it even simpler.
In addition
to
this
, it was incredibly helpful for my course,
for instance
, the course was like a practical implementation of
this
textbook. Earlier, it was difficult for me to go for the program, but
after
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reading
this
edition it increased my confidence immensely.
However
, I was supposed to return it to you
last
week, but a few days after the program was finished, I had fallen sick, and it was awful. I had a high fever, body ache, and the doctor had recommended to rest adequately.
Therefore
, I was bedridden for several days and because of
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I was not able to deliver the book back to you. Fortunately, I am feeling better now, and everything will be back to normal soon.
Nevertheless
, I apologize for the inconvenience, and I’ll be returning the edition to you, personally
this
time. Let me know when you are available so we could plan a meet. I hope you could understand my situation. Thanking you. Yours truly, Shakib Qureshi
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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