Task 1: The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
The diagram illustrates the man-made method of manufacturing
ethanol
fuel from corn
.
Overall
, there are nine stages in the process, begins with corns
Fix the agreement mistake
corn
are
harvested in Unnecessary verb
apply
the
huge field, and ends with Correct article usage
a
ethanol
fuel is
transported gas station.
In the first step, farmers harvest Wrong verb form
being
the
large amount of Change the article
a
corn
from the fields, then
the purchased corn
is stored in a storehouse for some time. Subsequently
, corn
is crushed by milling
machine and it becomes a form Correct article usage
a milling
corn
powder. Change preposition
of corn
The
Change preposition
In the
next
step, this
powder has cooked 4
hours; Change preposition
for 4
in addition
, water must be added to ensure when Add an article
the cook
cook
does not run out Wrong verb form
cooking
water
. Change preposition
of water
Following
this
, the mixture must pass a process of long fermentation around
48 hours; after fermenting, it should be separated Change preposition
of around
liquid
and solid Change preposition
into liquid
by- product
. Now, Correct your spelling
by-product
this
liquid is called ethanol
and it is purified 5
hours in the laboratory; Change preposition
for 5
after
this
, it is stored in the
big containers in a safe location and Correct article usage
apply
ethanol
fuel is transported gas station.Submitted by nguyennhancrazy on
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