Task 1: The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Task 1: The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
The diagram illustrates the man-made method of manufacturing
ethanol
fuel from
corn
.
Overall
, there are nine stages in the process, begins with
corns
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are
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harvested in
the
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huge field, and ends with
ethanol
fuel
is
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being
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transported gas station. In the first step, farmers harvest
the
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large amount of
corn
from the fields,
then
the purchased
corn
is stored in a storehouse for some time.
Subsequently
,
corn
is crushed by
milling
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machine and it becomes a form
corn
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powder.
The
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next
step,
this
powder has cooked
4
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hours;
in addition
, water must be added to ensure when
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cook
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does not run out
water
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.
Following
this
, the mixture must pass a process of long fermentation
around
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48 hours; after fermenting, it should be separated
liquid
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into liquid
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and solid
by- product
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. Now,
this
liquid is called
ethanol
and it is purified
5
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hours in the laboratory;
after
this
, it is stored in
the
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big containers in a safe location and
ethanol
fuel is transported gas station.
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