The chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eatem too much. Sumarise the information by searching and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts below compare the average percentages of nutrients American gain
in
4 typical means.
It is noticeable that Change preposition
by
the
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dinner
contains the most nutrients in the USA. And American
like Fix the agreement mistake
Americans
the
breakfast to be the most healthy meal Correct article usage
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in
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dinner
and snacks are unhealthy, compared with the other two types of meals. American take a third
of sodium, saturated fats and added sugar in the
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dinner
(103% in total). Besides
, snacks contain the second
highest amount of nutrients, which is 77%. For added sugar snacks include twice as much as dinner
.
The breakfast
, which is the most healthy, only accounts for 15% on average in all 3 diagrams. People Correct article usage
Breakfast
also
get much sodium and fat by eating the
lunch, 29% and 20% respectively. Correct article usage
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However
, added sugar is less in the
lunch, only Correct article usage
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one fifth
of that in one day.Add a hyphen
one-fifth
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