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Many people love to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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Dear sir/madam, I'm Dheeraj, pursuing advanced diploma in Leadership and Management at your esteemed college. In spite, I work full
time
 as a supervisor in a transport data company, I enrolled in
this
 course because I thought I can manage both, but now I decided to discontinue
course
Suggestion
courses
. Recent economical issues in the country and increase in the demand for traffic data, forcing me to do long hours. There is no
time
 to spend on studies. I am trying hard to adjust my work
time
, so I can spend some
time
 on studies, which is not happening. There is no other choice than discontinue the course. Kindly understand my situation and approve my termination. Thanks for your consideration, Regards, Dheeraj.
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