Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

#people #waste #homes #governments #requirement #laws

These days people around the world are suffering from many different pollutions and many governments are putting much effort and time to solve these problems. Especially most of the government

think

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thinks

recycling problem

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the recycling problem

as the most dangerous pollution. While I would agree that laws for recycling can be an efficient way to make people recycle, I think the governments should put effort and time to protect our environment in another way. On the one hand, there are not many people who think that recycling is important to save the earth and

this

is why I think appropriate fine and

punishment

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the punishment

will be

perfect solution

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the perfect solution

a perfect solution

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for

these people.

For instance

, South Korea has a law to regulate people who do not recycle, so most of the citizens recycle their trash every day.

However

, countries which do not have a rule yet for recycling

such

as India and Philippines are suffering from pollution.

Thus

, if these countries make people pay a bunch of fine when they throw trash without recycling, environmental pollution will be

solve

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solved

in the near future.

On the other hand

, the politicians should consider more efficient solution, not giving people financial punishment,

for example

, teaching advantages of recycling in schools and city councils to students and citizens, Most of the schools which are in our country have a course to teach the importance of recycling and there are

few classes

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a few classes

which any people who live in

same city

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the same city

can take as well.

Moreover education

Accept comma addition

Moreover, education

would be

fundamental solution

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the fundamental solution

a fundamental solution

to make people recycle.

Thus government

Accept comma addition

Thus, government

should put financial support to experts to make

more effective teaching method

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a more effective teaching method

in order to educate people. In conclusion, I think if the government should pay attention on both financial punishment and education method equally,

then

it is easier to solve our

enviornmental

of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

problems.

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Prediction or recommendation

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

299 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Waste management
Recycling
Sustainability
Mandatory
Voluntary
Legislative measures
Environmental impact
Public awareness
Regulation
Sanctions
Compliance
Recycling facilities
Consumer behavior
Waste reduction
Resource conservation
Circular economy
Eco-friendly
Biodegradable
Landfill
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