There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is Say what happened the last times you complained Explain what you want the manager to do

I am writing
this
letter to you to express my dissatisfaction about the
problems
connecting with the sports
center
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at
last
time. Obviously, I want to inform you
the
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head
problems
of your
sport
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sports
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center
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centre
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.
Firstly
, the
dood
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good
of the
sport
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sports
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center
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is completely broken that you should
to
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repair it for our security.
Secondly
, the
air
conditioner is not worked.
Moreover
, in summer the
air
is hard and uncomfortable.
In addition
, we may feel as if we're not getting enough
air
.
Nevertheless
, the
last
time I feel the absence of oxygen and I train with hardship.
However
, I would like that the manager of
this
sport
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center
to pay attention to these
problems
and supply our security with
new
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a new
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door and
air
conditioner, where we can
breath
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clean
air
. I hope, you will not ignore these
problems
at
this
time,
otherwise
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I should change my training centre. Yours sincerely White
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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