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The graph shows demographical data corresponding to the quantity of immigrants to the United States between the years 1992 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph shows demographical data corresponding to the quantity of immigrants to the United States between the years 1992 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line chart depicts the changes in demographic quantities of
immigrants
 over 16 years in
United
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the United
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 States. As can be seen in the graph
initially
, 30,000 people immigrated in the
assylums
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asylums
, 27,000 having
work
perimts
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permits
 and the lowest counts for spouses, a little less than 20,000 in '90. A peak rise to 60,000 was evident in '92 for asylums but at the same
time
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,time
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 no significant change could be noticed in
immiggrants
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immigrants
 having
work
 permits or spouse
visa
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visas
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. With a major decline, the number
for
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of
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 asylum
immigrants
 again came in the range slightly higher than 40,000 and
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remained
remainned
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remained
 constant till ;93,
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immigrants
immmigrants
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immigrants
 having spouse
visa
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visas
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 touched the line of 20,000 and
coincided
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coinciding
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 with
number
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the number
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 same of
work
 permits
Furthermore
, a significant rise can be seen after
the
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apply
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'99
where
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when
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 the
immigrants
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number of immigrants
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 for asylum reached
all
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all-time
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time
 high of 160000, 120000 as in the case of
work
 permits but spouses remained low to a level of 25000 in '02. the number of
work
 permit
immigrants
 kept inclining and reached 140000 at the same
time
 count in asylums drastically dropped to 22000 and spouses attained
peak
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the peak
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 of 42000 in '08 Concluding, the dominant position had been
took
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taking
taken
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 by
immigrants
 for
assylum
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asylum
 but
large scale
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large-scale
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 fluctuations can be seen. spouse
immigrants
 are recorded as
all
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all-time
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time
 low but are rising effective rise can be seen in
work
 permits

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Vocabulary: Replace the words immigrants, work, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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