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Many People like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case Is this a good thing or bad thing

#people #clothes #case
Today most
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Today, most
 of the people prefer to wear different styles of clothes. Unlike the early
years many
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years, many
 shops have been increased and the people who are doing shopping
also
 have become higher
comparing
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compared
comparable
 to past years.
I believe wearing
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I believe in wearing
 fashionable clothes is a good thing as that will make a
person
 more attractive and as well as well-mannered.I
have noticed
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notice
 today's world, clothing is taking a huge role of the image of a
person
's dignity and respect. So if people who are wearing stylish
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
 only considered as respectable people in the society.As my experience, I have seen even in some shops, people who are wearing stylish
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
 get more attention than the others from
there
of them or themselves
their
 service officers.So
this
 is how
today
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today's
todays
 society.
Therefore wearing
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Therefore, wearing
 nice clothes are really essential in
this
 society.
However
,
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,
wearing stylish
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
 can be a bad thing as well.If a
person
 doesn't know what to wear, in which situation, that will lead to a negative impact.As an
example if
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example, if
 a
person
 trying to wear fancy clothes
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
 a funeral place, obviously it is not suitable.So
likewise
 every cloths should be wear according to the occasion.And
also
 wearing these kind of
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
 can be bad impact for especially for the women.There are bad people who cannot control themselves by seeing the woman wearing stylish
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
 might be very short or
more tight
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tighter
 to the body.
This
 will
course
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
cause
 to sexual harassment, which is the main bad effect from the stylish
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
. My point of view is, even though there are both positive and negative
effect
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effects
 from wearing these stylish cloths
,
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,
to all these impacts, responsible the people are the ones who are wearing them.If people know how to choose their
cloths according
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cloths, according
 to the place and
also
 if they know the real purpose of wearing
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
, wearing stylish
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
 will never be a problem in future
,
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,
without hesitating all the people either male or female, or either young or old.

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