You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can move in

Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well! I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the delay in moving to your rented apartments, which was supposed to take place in the
next
month i.e. October. I will be travelling to Chennai because of an urgent client meeting and
also
have to train few new joiners in my company as well. I can't delay
this
task as my promotion is pending, which
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don't want to miss as
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great opportunity for me to grow in my career. I will be back in Hyderabad in the
first
week of November after completing all my pending work.
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your apartments on 8th November 2019 and
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have made all the arrangements as well. Hope you will understand my concerns over here. Regards, Mazher

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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