Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Mr.Sam, I am writing
this
letter to get some time off for the work starting from
next
week. As you were already aware about the application confirmation from BITS for my post graduate dual degree program in Data analysis. In order to complete
this
course I need to attend the live classes by the senior professor of BITS. The course duration is actually for 2 years, but somehow I will target to complete within a year. For
this
one year period, I will be in offline for my duties on our project. While I am away from the office, if I got any leisure time
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
I would like to go through the emails so that I can quickly understand the situation of our project progress.
Also
, I will do reply as soon as possible if the any of the e-mails waiting for my response. Probably, most of our teammates unaware about the
this
data analysis significance. I am sure it will helpful to our business unit works,
such
as organising the unstructured data, different ways of getting a quick response and the infrastructure maintenance.
Additionally
, It will provide authentication from security attacks. Requesting you to provide the approval for the leaves as soon as possible so that I will plan
accordingly
for my course. Yours sincerely, Meera Shareef

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