Percentage of Australian men and female doing regular physical activity : 2010
In graph below shown the difference percentage of Australian men and female in doing regular activities in regular activity on their regular basic. The graph, discuss between the ages 15 years to over than 65 years.
Firstly
, on the ages 15 to 25, the male more dominate and productive, follow by a woman on with 47.7%. Secondly
, for the ages 25 to 64 the woman percents are increased above the male. Such
as, in the ages of 35 to 44, which is 52.5% and the ages of 55 to 64 all the way same, that is
53%. The last
one, there are significant destruction, which is male was 46.7% and the female was 46.7%.
In conclusion, at the early ages or youth the male is more productive and attractive than female. Otherwise
, above ages 24 years old the female become more contribute on doing regular physical activity until the ages of 65 and being neutral between both genders.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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