The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012.
The bar
chat
illustrates how many children, divided by gender, played six kinds of sports (tennis, badminton, cycling, swimming, Correct your spelling
chart
football
and hockey) in a town in England in 2012.
Overall
, the number of boys
playing sport
exceeded that of Fix the agreement mistake
sports
girls
in the given period and the sport
with the most significant difference between the genders was football
. Football
was also
the most popular sport
for boys
while
the majority of girls
preferred swimming. Furthermore
, both males and females least preferred playing hockey.
There were four sports in which boys
participated more than girls
. While
60 boys
played football
, the number of girls
playing that sport
was considerably lower (around 20). With regards to tennis, the figure (4) for boys
who played that sport
was 50 as opposed to just under 40 for girls
. Similarly
, more boys
cycled than girls
(approximately 35 and 20 respectively). The difference, in terms of hockey, was minimal with only about 5 more boys
playing that sport
than girls
.
On the other hand
, more girls
took part in the two remaining sports which both showed a difference of about 10 between the genders. As many as 50 girls
preferred swimming in comparison to 40 girls
for badminton.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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