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The graph compared the amount of Beef, Pork, Broilers meat and poultry consumed in US in from the year 1955 to 2012.

The graph compared the amount of Beef, Pork, Broilers meat and poultry consumed in US in from the year 1955 to 2012.
#amount #beef #pork #broilers #meat #poultry #year
Overall
beef
 and pork were
initially
most
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 popular
type
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types
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 of meats.
In contrast
, the figure for
broilers
 and
turkey
were fluctuated
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fluctuated
have fluctuated
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 in the
pried
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period
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 (1961 and 2012). In the first
year
 (1955), the amount of
Beef
was
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apply
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increased significantly
while
 the figure for Pork
was
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dropped slightly, with 60 and 50
pounds
/
person
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per person
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 respectively. There reach in peak in 1976 with 90
pounds
 of
Beef
.
In contrast
, Pork
consumption
 was
fewer
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less
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 than
Beef
 which was approximately
at
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apply
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40
pounds
/
person
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per person
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. There
was
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apply
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fluctuated
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,
at
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to
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 40
pounds
 by 2012,
the
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and the
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 amount of
Beef
was
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apply
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fall gradually, to nearly 50
pounds
/
person
. At the beginning
in
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of
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 1961,
Broilers
 and
Turkey
consumption
 appeared, from 5 to 50
pounds
, respectively.
Broilers
 and
Turkey
 consumed gradually, for the years 1989 to 1991, in one-yearly intervals. In the
year
 1994, the
consumption
 of
Broilers
 took over from
Turkey
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Turkey's
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consumption
50
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of 50
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pounds
/
person
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perperson
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while
 there
were
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was
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 15
pounds
/
person
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perperson
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by
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in
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Turkey
consumption
. In the rest number of
year
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the year
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, both
of
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apply
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consumption
 (
Broilers
 and
Turkey
) fluctuated.
At the end
 of the
year
 (2012), the amount of
Broilers
 surpassed
Beef
, at 55
pounds
/
person
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per person
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, broilers, turkey, year, pounds, person, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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