Some People think that nowadays we have too many choices. Do you agree or disagree?

It is considered that in

this

day and age, as people, we have too many options available for everything. In my opinion, I agree that we have a long list to make our selection from.

This

essay discusses about the endless choices we have, right from our basic necessities to the luxurious needs. Food is one the primary needs of human beings,

however we

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however, we

have too many options available for

this

basic necessity as well. The wide variety is available for people of all age groups, including toddlers. In olden days, baby food was simply made at home from the ingredients available in the kitchen. While, today we have departmental stores full of baby food. There are hundreds of restaurants within the same city with countless cuisines on the one single menu.

This

situation is a consequence of globalization. To illustrate, Chinese people have migrated to all the corners of the people, resulting in availability of

chinese

a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China

Chinese

cuisine anywhere and everywhere.

Hence

, we have too many choices for our basic needs.

Fri Apr 24 2020

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

171 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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overwhelmed
decision fatigue
paralysis by analysis
consumerism
globalization
personal autonomy
market saturation
option overload
decision-making process
psychological well-being
buyer's remorse
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Some People think that nowadays we have too many choices. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Universities should enrol equal members of male and female students in all subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that entertainers(eg.film stars,pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

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