the charts give information about two genres of TV programes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia
The charts give information about the genres of TV shows that Australian men and women and different age groups watch.
Overall
, it’s obvious that women tend to watch TV more than men, even though they watch few
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sport
shows.
In detail, almost 70% of women enjoy watching reality series, Change the noun form
sports
while
only 35% of males tend to watch it
. For both charts, the top ratio (70%) went to Correct pronoun usage
them
the
people aged 45+, but Correct article usage
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figures
differ greatly.
The percentage of people watching reality shows grows steadily from ages 16 to 45 with the lowest number of viewers, at just over 50% of the age group 16-24 and the highest biggest percentage, at 68% of the over-45s.
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However
, game
shows demonstrate completely different figures. The number of Add an article
the show
show
watched by 25- to 44-year-olds is significantly lower than the number watched by 16- to 24-year-olds and those over 45. Just over 50% of 16- to 24-year-olds watch Fix the agreement mistake
shows
game
shows, but this
share is not as high as the share of people aged 45 and over watching game
shows, at nearly 70%. Only 41% of 35- to 44-year-olds watch game
shows, and the share of 24- to 34-year-olds is even lower at 38%.Submitted by bammesdilia24 on
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