The graph below gives information on wages of Somecountry over a ten-year period. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.

The graph below gives information on wages of Somecountry over a ten-year period.

Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
The line graph compares the amount of salary which is received by employees in other countries between 1993 and 2003.
It is clear that
the wage in
1998
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year was by far the
most
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highest over the period shown. The payment
of
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for
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2003
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the 2003
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year provided the lowest amount of salary for workers in
given
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year. Between 1993 and 1994 ,
the
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salaries
was
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normal and started to
rose
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dramatically to
peak
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the peak
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of 4
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per cent’s
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percent’s
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percent
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growth.
Then
, in 1996, the
percent
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of
payment
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payments
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tripped down to
3
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the 3
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percent
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percent’s
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per cent’s
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level. In 1997 the rate of wages strived for a high level and reached the highest index approximately in 1998.
However
, that mark was not achieving the best index for a long.
Since
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1999, it was falling down till 2003, when it saw only a small rise to approximately 1
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percent
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percent’s
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per cent’s
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level.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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