The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The represented diagram depicts a map with two potential locations for a proposed shopping mall for

inhabitants

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the inhabitants

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of Brandfield.

On

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overall

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, it is significant to note that the first position might be between the housing estate and the city

center

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centre

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,

while

the

second

would be constructed on the south below the city

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. If the shopping plaza was located at S1, the site would be very attractive

due to

a visited area by a great number of individuals

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but would be too bustling because of railways.

Also

, one of the biggest

advantage

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of

this

place is the river, which led to

the

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sport

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activities

as

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kayaking and swimming.

However

, there is environmental destruction

as a result

of daily carbon dioxide emissions

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by a majority of cars.

In contrast

, location S2 would not be

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point of the town as it is poorly populated.

Moreover

, it might be easily accessible for employees and families since surrounded by the railways and the main road.

Although

this

position is not crowded,

therefore

there would not be damage to

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. Another good reason is that the place is spacious and there would be possible to construct more facilities to attract visitors. By comparing the sites, building the shopping mall in location A would be a profitable business with a huge income.