The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about how much fund
earned
from exporting Add a missing verb
were earned
in
several Change preposition
apply
items
in a country in the two years (2015 and 2016) and units was
measured in Change the verb form
were
billion
dollars
. The table chart illustrates the proportion changes in the values of each product of exports in 2016, compared with 2015.
Overall
, almost the items
in 2016 had the highest amount of cash than
that Change preposition
apply
in
2015 except engineered Change preposition
apply
products
. Simultaneously, the categories related to textiles had the highest ratio of rise from 2015 to 2016.
First of all, there were about 72 billion
dollars
which were gained from exporting petroleum products
in 2016, this
figure was higher than that in 2015 (around 61 billion
dollars
). Meanwhile, the amount of money earned in 2016 still was higher than that in 2015 in exporting engineered goods
with around 61 billowing dollars
and nearly 58 billion
dollars
respectively. In contrast
, there was a distinctive difference from
Change preposition
between
two
previous Correct article usage
the two
items
that
the number of payments earned in 2015 was higher than that in 2016 in exporting gems and jewellery with almost 42 Change preposition
in that
billion
dollars
and nearly 41 dollars
. In addition
, the amount of capital earned in both 2015
and 2016 years had about the same figure with around 31 Correct article usage
the 2015
billion
dollars
in agricultural products
. Moreover
, around 26 billion
dollars
and almost 31 billion
dollars
were the number
of cash earned in exporting textile Change the noun form
numbers
goods
in 2015 and 2016 year, respectively.
Secondly
, the proportion changes in almost categories tended to rise from 2015 to 2016 excluded gems and jewellery goods
. Specially
, textile Replace the word
Especially
goods
had the highest proportion changes
in 2016 compared to 2015 Change preposition
of changes
to
15.24 Change preposition
at
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
there was only 0.81
% raise belonged to agricultural Correct article usage
a 0.81
products
. The petroleum products
and engineered goods
had the increase
percentage with 3% and 8.5%, respectively. Change the verb form
increasing
Finally
, the ratio of gems and jewellery items
decreased 5.18
Change preposition
by 5.18
percent
in 2016 compared to 2015.Change the spelling
per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words items, billion, dollars, products, goods with synonyms.
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