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Question: The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Question: The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the
number
 of woodland
area
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areas
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in
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on
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 six continents over the period of 25 years, from 1990 to 2005.
In
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Overall
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overall
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 the
number
 of total forested land
in
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all over the world had been decreased, though in Europe and
Asia
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,Asia
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 the forest area
were
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was
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 expanded.
While
 the
number
 of forested
land
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lands
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 in Europe slightly increased from 989
million
 ha in 1990 to 1001
million
 ha in 2005, the figures of that in both Africa and South America fell by roughly 60
million
, to 691
million
 ha and 882
million
 respectively. It is
also
 noticeable that the deforestation rates in the period from 2000 to 2005 in Africa
is
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are
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 slower (18
million
 hectares per 5 years) than the
number
 of that in South America (22
million
) The
number
 of forested
area
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areas
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 in North America and Asia
expericened
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experienced
 very little
changes
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,
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 and reached
from
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708, 576
million
 ha in 1990 to 705, 584
million
 ha in 2005 respectively. The deforestation in Oceania was
least
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the least
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servere
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severe
, which caused the loss of only 2
million
 ha from the total of 199
million
 ha of forested land in Oceania in
year
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the year
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 1990.
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