The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Bar Chart illustrates the
amount
of households with owned and rented Change the quantifier
number
accommodation
in two countries (England and Whales) from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, owned accommodation
showed upward
trend, Add an article
an upward
while
rented accommodation
showed downward
trend throughout the Correct article usage
a downward
period
. Both of these accommodations had some fluctuations. Although
owned accommodation
initially
had a lower rate, it out raced
rented Correct your spelling
outraced
accommodation
at the end
of the period
. Moreover
, both of them had
Unnecessary verb
apply
leveled
off in 1971.
Owned Change the spelling
levelled
accommodation
was at around 22% at the start of the period
in 1918 and it was far lower than rented accommodation
. Then
, it increased slightly and leveled
off in Change the spelling
levelled
next
two years Correct article usage
the next
with
33%. From 1961 to 2001, it showed Change preposition
at
the
increasing trend with Correct article usage
an
the
percentage of 40 in 1961Correct article usage
a
,
and Remove the comma
apply
equaled
Change the spelling
equalled
to
the percentage of rented Change preposition
apply
accommodation
in 1971 with 50%. And then
it increased to 60, 70 and nearly 71% respectively. Then
, it decreased slightly too
around 65%.
At the start of the Correct your spelling
to
period
rented accommodation
was higher with just under 80%. Then
, it faced decline
and remained constant in 1939 and 1953 Correct article usage
a decline
with
just below 70%. Change preposition
at
Then
, it decreased up till 2001 from 60% to 30%. Then
, it rose slightly in 2011 to almost 35%.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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