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All middle school should required student uniform.

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The decision of whether to implement a school
uniform
 or not is much controversial one. School is a place where students are coming from different cultures as well as of a distinct community. So, it is necessary to create more prominent culture amongst the students. Which can be achieved by making mandatory to wear similar clothes.
Uniform
 not only regard as a promoting social equality, but
also
 creates positive impact psychologically as well as socially. Psychologically, Same clothing for all students creates a sense of identity and equality which is shared through school spirit. As an outcome of it, students develop a strong team mentality. Instances of bullying of the students are
also
 reduced. There is no mental stress for students about what to wear.
As a result
, students are more focused on studying rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 worrying about what they wear. Less instances of bullying might
also
 lead to higher attendance of the students. Socially, crime related to students was one of the biggest
concern
Suggestion
concerns
 in the past, but with
uniform
 clothing amongst the students makes it easier to recognise students
as a result
 of it we can easily track student's activities. We can
also
 distinguish outsider who potentially hurt
student
Suggestion
studied
.
Besides
 that
uniform
also
 instill discipline in the students. Which is one of the most important aspect of human life. Discipline creates a strong impact on everyone. Many believe that discipline is a key to success.
Similarly
uniform
 develops a sense of equality. In conclusion,
uniform
 can make plenty of positive impact on the student's life socially as well as psychologically. Which can be helpful in their rest of the life. So, it is fair to say that all the school should make
uniform
 compulsory.
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