The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.
Task 1 (
Process
)
The figures illustrate how energy produced
from coal and Add a missing verb
is produced
also
there are some stages to express this
process
by that pictires
. Correct your spelling
pictures
picture
According to
from putting the coal with oxygen in furnace
to ready Add an article
a furnace
the furnace
flue
gases
.
The first step ish that the coal is put with oxygen in special
Correct article usage
a special
firnace
, and Correct your spelling
furnace
finance
then
taken raw syngas
. After that , to
remove ( CO 2 ) mercury sulfur . Fix the infinitive
apply
Subsequently
, to
remove purified Fix the infinitive
apply
syngas
from raw syngas
.
In order to , once the coal sended
Correct your spelling
sent
at
Change preposition
to
slag
part , the purified Correct article usage
the slag
syngas
is delivered gas turbine plus generator . The following step is
that this
item brought
to Add a missing verb
is brought
electricity
part . After that , Correct article usage
the electricity
gone
Wrong verb form
went
steam
turbine and generation
. Replace the word
generator
Next
, heat recovery steam
generation technology is produce
Change the verb form
produces
flue
gases
via special hot exhaust gases
.
Steam
turbine and generation also
aid to process
perfectly for to take flue
gases
. especially that is
out steam
for heat recovery generayor
. After Correct your spelling
generator
generators
finish
Wrong verb form
finishing
Correct article usage
the intire
intire
Correct your spelling
entire
process
, be ready flue
Change preposition
for flue
gases
to use .Submitted by mexmonaliyev4464 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, flue, gases, syngas, steam with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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