The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government should reflect this. To what extent do you agree

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to the watch that I had lost during the vacation that I took
last
week, it was a Tag Heur brand watch which has golden chain and inside the dial there were diamonds on all the numbers and it has two sub dials as well which shows the
second
hour and
second
clock. I believe when I left the hotel to explore the place and it was quite busy that day with lot of rush out there and in that midst of chaos I believe I had lost it. Because after we reached the venue,
then
I realised that the watch was missing at that time I realised that I had lost during my travel in the busiest train. Sir, I request you to kindly process the insurance amount as soon as possible and meanwhile I can share all the purchasing details of that watch. Yours Sincerely Jaspreet Singh.

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