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The national coronavirus
lockdown
in
India
has been extended beyond 4 May for another two weeks. New guidelines, outlined on Friday, update the
country
's designated red, green and orange zoning system. Red
zones
are considered hotspots,
while
considerable relaxations will be permitted in
areas
considered less dangerous.
India
has been under
lockdown
measures
since 24 March, with more than 35,000 cases confirmed nationally. There have been just over 1,100 deaths. The outbreak has caused large economic disruption across the
country
, with many labourers deprived of income and migrant workers left stranded in economic hardship. All of
India
's major metropolitan
areas
remain classified as red
zones
and will stay under strict
lockdown
measures
, Reuters reports. The national coronavirus
lockdown
in
India
has been extended beyond 4 May for another two weeks. New guidelines, outlined on Friday, update the
country
's designated red, green and orange zoning system. Red
zones
are considered hotspots,
while
considerable relaxations will be permitted in
areas
considered less dangerous.
India
has been under
lockdown
measures
since 24 March, with more than 35,000 cases confirmed nationally. There have been just over 1,100 deaths. The outbreak has caused large economic disruption across the
country
, with many labourers deprived of income and migrant workers left stranded in economic hardship. All of
India
's major metropolitan
areas
remain classified as red
zones
and will stay under strict
lockdown
measures
, Reuters reports.The national coronavirus
lockdown
in
India
has been extended beyond 4 May for another two weeks. New guidelines, outlined on Friday, update the
country
's designated red, green and orange zoning system. Red
zones
are considered hotspots,
while
considerable relaxations will be permitted in
areas
considered less dangerous.
India
has been under
lockdown
measures
since 24 March, with more than 35,000 cases confirmed nationally. There have been just over 1,100 deaths. The outbreak has caused large economic disruption across the
country
, with many labourers deprived of income and migrant workers left stranded in economic hardship. All of
India
's major metropolitan
areas
remain classified as red
zones
and will stay under strict
lockdown
measures
, Reuters reports.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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